A long-time fan of DI Lorne Warner and the Justice series, and more recently a fan of the DI Hero Nelson series I was thrilled when Mel announced she was combining the two characters for a new novel. Both characters have strong personalities, and both are willing to step outside the boundaries when necessary. Would they be able to work together?
Due to family problems I was a little late on starting my ARC and had the advantage of reading other reviews which touted this as Ms. Comley's best book yet. This made me even more eager to dive in with a fresh cup of coffee and bury myself in the pages. In my opinion it was going to be hard for her to top my two favorite reads--Dubious Justice and Cold Case from the DI Sally Parker series. Those two books left an emotional impact with me that kept me thinking of them long after I finished the books, and they still remain at the top of my list for favorite reads.
To coin a British phrase I did find Heroic Justice 'bloody brilliant'. As an author myself I may notice things that I wouldn't perhaps just reading a good book. I'm not a huge fan of narrative and love character driven fiction. Heroic did not disappoint. At times I felt I was in the room with the characters listening to the conversation as Ms. Comley weaved in background for both characters so seamlessly that I was awe struck. Absolutely brilliant! Readers who have never opened a Justice book or a Hero book will still feel they know the characters intimately. Readers who have followed these characters as I have will thoroughly enjoy the revisiting of the past through conversation, not an info dump. Can I saw 'brilliant' again?
In today's world serial killers are more the norm than the exception. Often to find them you have to understand their motives. Both Lorne and Hero do an excellent job of delving deep into the few clues the killer leaves behind. Having experienced tragedy in their own lives their compassion for the victims and their families is heart-warming. An excellent police procedural.
I would definitely tag this a five star read for lovers of crime, police procedure and fast-paced thrillers. I loved seeing Lorne and her husband, Tony, working together and hope that becomes more of the norm in future novels. I can't imagine working with my husband, but the mutual respect Tony and Lorne have for each other, and the skills each possesses makes them a perfect working couple. So often we get a one-sided few of characters and experience only their work, but Ms. Comley is delightful in her ability to show the many facets--even flaws--of each character, including the antagonist.
I recommend setting aside some time before you start, as once you get involved you're not going to want to stop reading until the very last page...and even then you may find yourself thinking about this book. Available for pre-order now. Release date--11/13/17.
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Saturday, November 11, 2017
Sunday, October 1, 2017
Sneak Peek! #SundaySample
As promised, here's a sneak peek at the Prologue and Chapter 1 of Innocent Blood. Enjoy your Sunday, and happy reading!
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PROLOGUE
Loki
Redmond woke to the sound of a door softly closing. She tossed off the covers
and made her way to the window, welcoming the reprieve from her dark,
disturbing dreams. At least it wasn’t a
vision.
Her
brother Jules stood outlined in the moonlight, his fists clenched at his sides.
A well of sadness opened up inside her at the sight of him standing there with
his head bowed. If her dreams were dark and disturbing, his would be a thousand
times worse.
Loki
rummaged through her chest and donned shorts and a T-shirt. It was already warm,
and the day ahead promised to be blistering. Since they were both awake, they
might as well talk about what was bothering them. She tiptoed down the hall, through
the kitchen, and out the back door. If he woke, Jake would demand to know what
was bothering her, and she didn’t honestly know. Her dreams were most likely
the product of her grandfather’s call for help with an issue on the
reservation. He’d reminded her of her duty to her people.
Her people. Strange that Grandfather
should put it that way. He’d constantly criticized her and her brothers and
shouted more than once that they weren’t true Choctaw. He’d belittled their mother
right up until the day of her death. Loki shook off the emotions churning in
her gut. Grandfather was an old man now, and hating him would only hurt her.
“Hey.”
She approached Jules slowly, aware that at times he walked in his sleep. “Bad
dreams?”
Jules
picked up a rock and threw it into the trees that surrounded the back of the
property. “Horrible.”
“Want
to talk about it?”
He
shook his head. “I’m sorry I woke you.”
Placing
an arm around his waist, she stood with him, just watching the beauty of the early
morning breeze gently swaying the trees. “You didn’t wake me, but even if you
did, I’m glad. My dreams weren’t very pleasant, either.”
“Maybe
you shouldn’t go to the reservation today. After the way they treated us, you
don’t owe them anything.”
Loki
sighed and dropped her arm. “Is that what’s bothering you?”
“No.”
Frustration
overwhelmed her. For years Jules hadn’t said a word, trapped in his own mind
with a horror he didn’t know how to express. All that had changed last year
when she’d brought Jake to Grandpa Zachery’s farm to heal after his wife’s
murder. What was supposed to be a vacation turned into a fight for their life
against a madman and his mother, but for Jules it had been a miracle of sorts.
They’d managed to save Grace, a thirteen-year-old who had been kidnapped and
abused by the serial killers, and her month-old baby, Hope. And Grace had
helped Jules heal. The two of them shared a bond that few people would ever
understand. “I can’t help you, Jules, if you won’t talk to me.”
“Talking
won’t change it, Loki. You and I both know that.”
“No,
but sometimes it helps to share things.”
“Why
do we call this the Redmond Farm?”
Loki
chuckled. “Because Grandpa loved our mother so much that when she married our
father, he changed the name of the farm. Sometimes I think he did it just to
piss off Grandfather Redmond.”
“There’s
something evil about Grandfather Redmond, Loki. Don’t trust him.”
“I
didn’t before, and I’m not going to now.” She studied Jules’s face, looking for
clues about what was truly behind his pain. “If there’s something you know
about what’s going on at the reservation, you should tell me.”
“Have
you ever known something was wrong but you didn’t know what it was or how to
stop it?”
Loki
dropped to the ground, hugged her knees to her chest, and patted the spot
beside her. “You know how my visions work. I get images or feelings, and it’s
always after something horrible has happened. I can never stop it.”
Jules
finally sat beside her. “Some of the spirits are angry. Some are very sad. They
say innocent blood has been shed, and the blood of more innocents will be shed
in the coming days.”
“Have
you talked to Grace about this?”
“She
feels the same thing. I think she knows more, but she’s not ready to share it
yet.”
“Do
you know when this is supposed to happen?”
“Today.”
Loki
shuddered. She and Dadron were leaving for the reservation first thing this morning.
The sun began to rise, but it did nothing to dispel the chill sinking into her
bones and encompassing her. “Does this have anything to do with Grandfather?”
Jules stood, brushed off his jeans, and walked
toward the forest. His voice was sad and filled with pain. “No, but you should
tell Jake you love him before you leave.”
CHAPTER
ONE
The
early morning sun blazed down on the small ravine as Jake Savior knelt beside
Jules Redmond and studied the ground. In a few more hours the heat would be
unbearable. “Anything at all?” Jake asked.
“Nothing.”
Jules stood and wiped the sweat from his brow. “A child couldn’t have gone into
that brush pile without leaving some trace.”
Jake
removed his neckerchief and wiped his face. “So I guess it was a spirit or
ghost or whatever it is you guys see that the rest of us don’t.”
“Loki
doesn’t see spirits.”
“Well,
she certainly saw something, and it’s happened three times now.” Jake started
the slow climb to the road. It had been a long shot, bringing Jules here, but Jake
felt helpless when it came to the things Loki experienced. This one had upset
her more than usual.
“Maybe
it was a vision.” Jules followed close on Jake’s heels.
“Water or beer?” Jake lifted the hatch on the
Highlander and pulled out the cooler. “Is it always this hot here in April?
It’s not even eight o’clock yet.”
“Water.
It’s too early for beer.” Jules took the bottle, splashed half of it on his
face, and drank the rest. “The winter was strangely cold, and no, it isn’t
normally this hot in April. Doesn’t bode well for the summer months.”
Jake
popped the top on a can of beer and took a long drink, his eyes scanning the
terrain. “There aren’t any houses anywhere near here in either direction. If
this is a vision of something destined to happen in the future, where would a
child come from?”
Jules
shrugged and grabbed another bottle of water. “Loki’s visions usually come
after something has already happened.” He pointed at the ravine. “But there are
no spirits here. We could have Grace search the computer databases and see if
there were any car wrecks where a family was injured or died and a young girl
survived and ran away. ”
“Sounds
like a plan.” Jake slammed the hatch. “It’s too hot to stay out here any longer,
and I’m hungry. You want to drive?”
The
young boy’s face lit up. “Really?”
Jake
tossed him the keys. “You’ve got your permit, and you have to learn sometime.”
He held up the beer and grinned. “And I’ve been drinking before breakfast.”
Jules
adjusted the seat and mirrors, waited for Jake to buckle up, and started the
car. “So what exactly did Loki see?”
“A
young girl, maybe five or six years old, running across the road. Loki thinks she
was Choctaw, but she can’t be sure.”
“And
you didn’t see her?”
“Nope.
The first time she screamed stop, I
almost flipped the car in the ditch. Loki ran after her, but she disappeared
into that cluster of brush we just searched.”
“And
is it always the same time of day?” Jules’s eyes locked on the road in front of
him.
“I
never really thought about it, but yeah, it was close to the same time all
three evenings. Dark enough to have the lights on but not totally dark,” Jake
said.
Jake
leaned back in the seat and closed his eyes. In the past year, he’d accepted
Loki’s visions, as well as the fact that Jules and Grace saw things no one else
could. For Loki, the visions were simply part of her Choctaw heritage. Grace’s
ability was brought on by trauma and loneliness during the years she was held
captive by a madman and his crazy mother. Jules’s abilities were probably a
combination of his Choctaw heritage and trauma. Jake had learned firsthand what
trauma and grief could do to the human psyche. His friends’ abilities might be preferable
to the insanity that had seized him after his wife’s murder. His heart still
ached for Cara at times, but with Loki’s love, he was healing a little more
each day and building a new life in Mississippi.
“Have
you heard from Loki and Dadron?”
“She
called to say they had arrived. I don’t expect to hear anything else until later.
Cell service out there isn’t the best in the world. She said she’d call if they
were staying overnight.” Jake shot a glance at Loki’s younger brother. Worry
lines wrinkled Jules’s forehead, replacing the earlier gleeful face, and he
gripped the wheel tightly. “Something bothering you, Jules?”
“Grace
says the spirits are restless, and something terrible is about to happen. She
doesn’t know what, but it has something to do with innocent blood.”
“And
you think that has something to do with what’s going on on the reservation, or
the kid Loki keeps seeing?”
“I
don’t know. I don’t think so, but there are those in the tribe who love and
respect Loki, and those who hate and fear her.” Jules’s voice faltered for a
moment. “The hate is because of me.”
“She
only promised to listen to what her grandfather had to say. Besides, Dadron is
with her. He’s not going to let anything happen to her.”
“I
still don’t think she should have gone there.” Jules turned in to the driveway
leading to the farm. “This is not her fight, and she doesn’t owe Grandfather
anything.” He parked in front of the house, turned off the motor, and handed
the keys to Jake. “Thank you. Tell Grace not to set a place for me.”
“Where
are you going?” Jake exited the vehicle quickly, but Jules was already disappearing
into the forest behind the house.
The
door to the farmhouse opened, and Grace came out on the landing. “Let him go,
Jake.”
“Any
idea where he’s headed?”
“He
built a sweat lodge yesterday. He’s gone there to fast and pray for those who
are about to die.”
~ ~ ~
Loki
Redmond grabbed the door handle and held on tight as the vehicle hit a pothole.
“With all the money pouring in from the casinos, can’t they do something about
this section?”
Tim
“Bearclaw” Whitefeather jerked the wheel to avoid another hole. “Politics.”
Loki
glanced in the rearview mirror, meeting Dadron’s angry gaze. She understood his
anger as they passed another section of clapboard houses, the yards littered
with empty liquor bottles and piles of trash. They’d left the more prominent
sections of the reservation over an hour ago and were now traveling through the
parts hidden from tourists. She also understood Tim’s comment about politics.
Even here, miles from what was referred to as civilization, the rich got richer
and the poor continued to suffer.
Tim
pulled into a section of trees and parked. “The basin is about a half mile
through the forest. We’ll walk from here.”
Loki
motioned for Dadron to hang back as she rushed to catch up with Tim. “Why did
Grandfather want to meet out here?”
“You’ll
have to ask him.”
Grabbing
Tim’s arm, she turned him to face her. “I’m asking you. You haven’t said ten
words to us since we got here. We were friends once. And you know how
Grandfather feels about us. Please, tell me what this is about.”
“Nalusa
Falaya.”
“You
can’t be serious.” Loki laughed and shook her head. “Nalusa Falaya is a myth.
Like the boogeyman, something made up by parents to keep the children inside
after dark.”
“We
have two missing hunters, Loki.”
“That
doesn’t mean anything. If they’re unfamiliar with the area, they probably just
got lost out here.”
“We
found the third hunter.”
Dadron
joined them. “Dead or alive?”
Tim’s
jaw set in a hard line, and his eyes darkened. “Mostly dead. We’re wasting time,
and your Grandfather doesn’t like to be kept waiting.”
Loki
hung back to walk with Dadron. She really didn’t care what her grandfather
liked or didn’t like. Tim had been her cousin Harry’s best friend all through
childhood. They’d gone through the police academy together, and Tim had joined
the tribal police when Harry had moved to Corpus Christi and joined the police
department there. Living on the reservation kept some of the old myths and
culture alive, but no one believed in Nalusa Falaya. “What do you think he
means by ‘mostly dead’?”
“Grandfather
asked you to bring Jules with you, didn’t he?” Dadron asked.
“Maybe.”
Loki watched Tim’s back as he stalked away from them. Grandfather hadn’t asked
her to bring Jules, he’d demanded she bring Jules. He’d wanted all three of
them here. “Don’t worry, Dadron. It will be a cold day in hell before they get
their hands on Jules again.”
Sunday, September 4, 2016
#SundaySample - Chapter One - Tragic Deception
Best selling British author, M. A. Comley and I are proud to introduce the Deception series. Mel and I have talked about co-authoring for years, but only recently did we turn that talk into action. Although are genres are similar, our styles are somewhat different, and we wondered if we could find our rhythm. Once we found our character, Sergeant Alexandra Fox, the rest was easy. Early reviews of our introductory novella, Clever Deception, have thrilled and humbled us. If you're a member of Goodreads you can check out the early reviews there. Our first novel is now available for pre-order and will be released on October 1st. The novella, Clever Deception is also available for pre-order and will be released on September 14th. Book 2 is will under way. I hope you enjoy this sample of Tragic Deception. We believe Alex has a long and tempestuous career ahead of her.
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TRAGIC DECEPTION
CHAPTER ONE
“As of eight o’clock this morning, we have three missing
babies. Only one is in our borough, but we’ll we working in conjunction with
all precincts. Talk to your CIs, keep your ears open, and knock down doors if
you have to—but find those babies.”
Commander Patterson was winding down his morning speech, and
for once, the squad room was quiet and somber. “Any questions?”
He waited only a second before issuing his final command.
“Then hit the streets and find those babies.” His dark eyes bored through the
crowd, homing in on her. “Fox, my office.”
Alexandra waited for the snickers and “Alex the Fox”
comments that usually followed his summons, which happened frequently—at least
once a month, and more likely than not, once a week. She shot a glance at her
current partner, Corey Graves, who averted his eyes and turned his back on her.
“Bloody tosser,” she mumbled as she pushed her way through the throng of
officers to follow the commander.
She knocked on the door and waited for the command that
would allow her to enter. Even after a year, Alex didn’t quite understand
American protocol. He’d ordered her to meet him in his office; why couldn’t he
just leave the damn door open?
“Come in.”
Opening the door, she stuck her head inside. “You wanted to
see me, sir?”
Patterson sighed heavily. “Come in and close the door behind
you.”
Alex stepped inside the room, closed the door, and took her
position in front of his desk. She’d made the mistake once of sitting down
without an invitation. Her face flushed at the memory. Patterson didn’t like
her, and she knew if it weren’t for Chief Brown, he would have fired her on the
spot. She’d learned to play Patterson’s game, but she didn’t like it.
Patterson eyed her over his glasses, a smirk playing around
his lips. “No surprise, but Officer Graves no longer wishes to partner with
you. He called you a ticking time bomb.”
“Right. Like I’m the bloody one off with the fairies.”
His face blanched. “What the hell does that mean, Fox?”
Alex met his gaze head on. “It means Graves needs to pull
his head out of his arse, stop ogling the skirts, and do his job. Most of us
eat three times a day. Graves has to be laid three times a day, or he can’t
function.”
His gaze slowly drifted away from hers when she refused to admit
defeat. He opened the window behind the desk, then leaned back in the chair,
bit off the end of a cigar, and lit it. His eyes held a challenge when they met
hers again. Smoking had been banned in New York for several years. An officer
could actually be dismissed if caught smoking on the grounds. She could report
him, but Patterson would probably get a slap on the wrist, and warning. “You’ve
lost six partners in the last year, Fox. I suppose all of them were ‘off with
the fairies’?”
The anger bubbling just below the surface rose, and Alex
clenched her hands at her side. He’s
probably going to fire me anyway, so sod it. “I have never lost a partner, sir. Not one of them has
been shot, knifed, beaten, or killed. I do my job, which is to have their back,
not inflate their egos or their willies.”
Patterson puffed on the cigar and blew smoke in her
direction. “Sit down, Fox.”
Pulling out a chair next to his desk, she sat, steeling
herself for a long lecture on the importance of loyalty and fitting in. A chill
shivered down her spine. She hoped he didn’t ask her about the bloody book he’d
given her last time. How to Win Friends
and Influence People. She’d thrown it in the trash after reading the first
chapter.
“You passed all the protocol for detective.” Patterson ruffled
the papers on his desk as he continued to huff and puff on the cigar. The smirk
around his lips widened. “Except one—a recommendation from me.”
“I’m a good copper, sir. I deserve that promotion.”
He shrugged. “The problem is your attitude and your refusal
to fit in.”
Anger surged to the surface again, and she gripped the arms
of the chair. “You mean conform, sir.
Not fit in.”
He eyed the white knuckles, and Alex took a deep breath,
forcing herself to relax as Patterson continued. “You’re not in England, Fox.
Half the time, we can’t understand what the hell you’re saying, and the other
half, we feel like you’re insulting us.” His jaw tightened, and his eyes
darkened. “Fit in or get out.”
“Recommend the promotion, and I’ll be out of your hair,
maybe even out of your district.”
He chuckled. “I’ll do you one better.” He rummaged through
the papers on his desk then pulled out a file and passed it to her. “You want
to be a detective? Find those babies before the FBI does, and I’ll recommend
your promotion.”
Alex flipped through the file, which contained some of the
same information that had been passed out earlier, along with a more in-depth
case summary listing the names and addresses of the parents, doctors, nurses,
and hospitals as well as pictures of the newborns.
“You’ve got a week. That’s how long I’m suspending you.”
Her head jerked up, and she once again met the dark gaze.
“Suspending me? For what, sir?”
“Insubordination.”
He continued to puff on the cigar and blow smoke in her
direction. He wanted her to challenge him. She hadn’t been insubordinate, but
he knew if he pushed hard enough, she could be.
“And how exactly am I supposed to investigate while under
suspension? I won’t have access to anything.”
He sneered. “You like working alone. Isn’t that what you’ve
told me for the last year?”
Alex closed the file and stood. “And if I can’t find them in
a week?”
“Send out some resumes. You’ll be looking for a new job.”
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Monday, March 30, 2015
Beyond A Reasonable Doubt - Meet the Supporting Cast
Now available for Pre-Order. Like all my books, I like to give my fans a chance to pick up new novels as cheap as possible. I've set the pre-order introductory price at $.99. See links below. Release date is April 17th, so stay tuned for a huge release party involving New York Times and USA Today best selling author, M. A. Comley. We'll have some great prizes and lots of fun. If you missed the earlier posts of "meet the good guys" and "meet the bad guys" you might want to take a quick look. I've rated this book R for language, violence and rape. If you're offended by any of that, you may want to pass on this one as it's much stronger and more graphic than my usual novels. Join me tomorrow for Blunders or Bloopers and out-takes.
THE SUPPORTING CAST
My fans who have read earlier novels realize it's unusual for me to limit myself to just the protagonist and antagonist, but normally include a supporting cast that weaves sub-plots into the novel. The supporting cast for Beyond became some of my favorite characters of all time. A few of them I'm sure will find their way into spin off novels of their own.
Clifford Beaumont ~~ No one works in Corpus Christi without feeling the political power of Clifford Beaumont. Rumors associate him with the mob, but no one has ever proven it. His hands have been clean for a long time, but they're about to get dirty. Real dirty.
Favorite Quote ~~ “They all say that, son. But everybody talks. All you’ve got to decide is how much blood you want to lose before you do it.”
Drago ~~ Former henchman for Marcus Dade. A dark and mysterious man.
Favorite Quote ~~ “You can call me Tom. It’s a good name.”
FBI Agent Carl Starks ~~ Another dark and mysterious man, playing both sides. A very dangerous game.
Favorite Quote ~~ "Take care, Miss James, and don’t trust anyone.” His jaw tightened, and his eyes darkened. “Even me.”
Gregory Artusa ~~ Henchman for Marcus Dade. A perfect example of the darkness of night, a natural born killer whose instincts were to kill first and ask questions later.
Favorite Quote ~~ “Doesn’t have to go down this way, David.”
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THE SUPPORTING CAST
My fans who have read earlier novels realize it's unusual for me to limit myself to just the protagonist and antagonist, but normally include a supporting cast that weaves sub-plots into the novel. The supporting cast for Beyond became some of my favorite characters of all time. A few of them I'm sure will find their way into spin off novels of their own.
Clifford Beaumont ~~ No one works in Corpus Christi without feeling the political power of Clifford Beaumont. Rumors associate him with the mob, but no one has ever proven it. His hands have been clean for a long time, but they're about to get dirty. Real dirty.
Favorite Quote ~~ “They all say that, son. But everybody talks. All you’ve got to decide is how much blood you want to lose before you do it.”
Drago ~~ Former henchman for Marcus Dade. A dark and mysterious man.
Favorite Quote ~~ “You can call me Tom. It’s a good name.”
FBI Agent Carl Starks ~~ Another dark and mysterious man, playing both sides. A very dangerous game.
Favorite Quote ~~ "Take care, Miss James, and don’t trust anyone.” His jaw tightened, and his eyes darkened. “Even me.”
Gregory Artusa ~~ Henchman for Marcus Dade. A perfect example of the darkness of night, a natural born killer whose instincts were to kill first and ask questions later.
Favorite Quote ~~ “Doesn’t have to go down this way, David.”
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